Thursday, March 11, 2010

Tiempos Modernos

En este video los hombres comían y el policía veía a ellos. Un hombre escondió el polvo en una botella de sal. Un otro hombre puso el polvo en su comida. Entonces este hombre era loco. Él liberó los presos y capturó los guardias. Entonces él se peleó con los presos y liberó los guardias.
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  1. DanyMarch 13, 2010 at 1:10 PM

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  2. DanyMarch 13, 2010 at 1:10 PM

    Iva:

    Very nice start. You seem to have a good understanding of the preterite and imperfect. However, there are more events (background and foreground)in the video clip that need to be described. I would suggest you to add more content.

    Also as you revise, here are a few words or phrases that you need to fix:

    1.En está video (agreement?)
    2.el policía veía ellos (pronoun and/or impersonal "a" needed)

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  3. DanyMarch 21, 2010 at 6:54 PM

    Shirley:

    Tomaste en cuenta mis comentarios?

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